18 March 2008

I like when this happens

This morning, as I woke up, some lines for a poem I've been writing came into my head.

New, improved lines, for a section of the poem I'd been struggling with.

These are the lines, the opening lines, of a poem called 'Jaffa':

I have one foot in the desert, the other in the sea.
I am making a full circle.
I am walking through the streets

And these streets know me.
These streets are whispering, "Home."
.... etc

I really like when this happens!

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